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Sentence 7:Dealing with your company’s needs we are most flexible.
The most effective revision of sentence 7 should begin with which group of words?
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Sentence I am writing to you on behalf of the Galena Arts Academy.
Which correction should be made to sentence 1?
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Sentence 1Not only is water being wasted through evaporation, but also conditions they are being created for the sun to burn your lawn.
Which correction should be made to sentence 13?
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Sentences 15 and 16:Please reconsider your position.Support those of us who want to keep our town quiet and local merchants in business.
The most effective combination of sentences 15 and 16 would begin with which group of words?
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Sentence 1Keep several of the dishes refrigerated until they is needed.
What correction should be made to sentence 15?
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Sentence 1Rush delivery an additional $4.00 and Silver Wing service, an additional $8.00.
Which correction should be made to sentence 15?
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Sentences 2 and I will graduate this May from Central Community College.I will graduate with an Associate of Arts degree in Business Management.
Which is the best way to write the underlined portion of these sentences? If the original is the best way, choose optionA.
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Sentence 10:The task of the Everest cleanup is a huge one that require the cooperation of all involved.
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Which sentence would be most effective if inserted at the beginning of paragraph D?
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Where should the following sentence be placed in the document?
Here is how to do it.
Which correction should be made to sentence 12?
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Sentence 6:When you take a shortcut from the kitchen, certain people being bothered by traffic.
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Sentence 1It requires contributions of time and resources from those who are genuinely interesting in keeping Everest clean for generations to come.
Which correction should be made to sentence 11?
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Sentence Because I have agreed with many of your previous editorials, I do not agree with your position regarding the proposed shopping mall on the south end of town.
Which is the best way to rewrite the underlined portion of this sentence? If the original is the best way, choose optionA.
Sentence 9:In fact, because gold is so soft, it must be mixed with harder metals to make crowns jewelry, and other decorations.
Which is the best way to write the underlined portion of this sentence? If the original is the best way, choose optionA.
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Which revision would improve the effectiveness of paragraph C?
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Sentence 1A 15-quart pot of stew takes at least 24 hours to cool in the center, allowing plenty of time for bacteria to develop and multiply.
Which correction should be made to sentence 11?
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Which sentence would be most effective if inserted at the beginning of paragraph D?
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Sentence 6:We begin the session and gave you guidance that will help you decide what kinds of jobs are suitable, given your current skills.
Which correction should be made to sentence 6?
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Sentence What makes Jitney Delivery so convenient to you is our mobile phone system.
Which correction should be made to sentence 4?
Sentence 1Start the engine of the booster vehicle and run it a few minutes and then start the engine of the other vehicle.
Which is the best way to write the underlined portion of this sentence? If the original is the best way, choose optionA.
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Sentence 8:If staff assistants file reports sent from the legal department as soon as possible, then I am certain we will see immediate improvement over the present system.
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Sentence 1As an employee, any organization would be proud to have someone like her.
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Sentence While some of the potential contaminants comes from the store or garden, the main danger is right in the kitchen.
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Sentence An “Invoice and Statement” was received telling me that I owe an operation called:Allstar Football Benefit
$29.65 in the mail last week.
The most effective revision of sentence 4 would begin with which group of words?
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Sentence How many times were you caught in slow-moving traffic and been frustrated because vehicles in the lanes beside you are moving faster than you are?
Which is the best way to write the underlined portion of this sentence? If the original is the best way, choose optionA.
Sentence 10:While they don’t count as places off the beaten track many woodland spaces are preserved within city limits.
Which correction should be made to sentence 10?
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Sentence 9:In spite of the initiatives of these organizations, there is still groups who are not willing to do their part.
Which correction should be made to sentence 9?
Sentence 1Now, still leaving power-draining accessories turned off take your vehicle out for a good drive on the highway to recharge your battery fully.
Which correction should be made to sentence 14?
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Sentence 6:Vehicles spreading out when going fast and pack together when moving slowly.
The most effective revision of sentence 6 would include which group of words?
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Sentence Our developer B & B Real Estate Corporation, has looked at the rental records and has noticed that the tenants have maintained a good credit history with Sunny Park.
Which correction should be made to sentence 5?
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Sentence The legal files in the first floor storage area are usually not in order, they contain obsolete material that can lead us to produce inaccurate reports.
Which is the best way to write the underlined portion of this sentence? If the original is the best way, choose optionA.
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Sentence 20:If we continue to receive complaints regarding inappropriate workstation behavior, management, will have to find a better means of controlling the situation.
Which correction should be made to sentence 20?.
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Which revision should be made to sentence 7?
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Sentence 10:It’s more than just changing fluids and wipers or fixing breaks.
Which correction should be made to sentence 10?
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Sentence 17:A more specific timetable is available after the meetings.
Which is the best way to write the underlined portion of this sentence? If the original is the best way, choose optionA.
Sentence If problems with a weak battery persist, pay an early visit to a garage mechanic to have the battery checked and, if necessary, replaced.
Which revision should be made to sentence 2?